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15 August 2008 @ 07:44 am
Rainbow Sprinkles  
Rating: G
Pairing: Eunhyuk/Donghae
Genre: Drabble
Summary: Eunhyuk is disillusioned.
Disclaimer: I don't own Super Junior.
A/N: Like Help Me Keep Quiet, it's another attempt at being poetic.

Hyukjae put out his cigarette on the windowsill, the one that he lit only two minutes ago. He couldn’t remember when he started to smoke. He hated smokers, so why was he puffing a little roll of death?

Donghae.

That was reason. Three months ago, Donghae departed without an explanation, leaving Hyukjae behind to face the wrath of Seoul.

Seoul was a city of dreamers and it wasn’t too kind to its residents. Hyukjae remembered coming here three years ago in hopes of reaching his dreams. How naïve he was and how deceitful the glimmering lights. But everything became better when he met Donghae, the one who always laughed, always smiled. The decay of the city never wrapped itself around the younger man.

Sighing, Hyukjae picked up a rainbow-sprinkled doughnut that he bought earlier. He chewed mournfully as he stared at the bright lights of the city. The streetlights, the tall skyscrapers, the stores. They all added to the illusion.

Hyukjae took another bite of his doughnut. He hated sprinkles. They reminded him of the city lights, of the artificiality of his dreams. They burned the roof of his mouth, but for some reason, he couldn’t seem to stop.

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Current Mood: blahblah
Current Music: vulnerable - secondhand serenade
 
 
 
raknakondee on August 21st, 2008 07:08 am (UTC)
again mina
i like happy ending!
daffydilly121daffydilly121 on August 21st, 2008 08:56 pm (UTC)
it is happy
what are you talking about
grrrr

but very poetic no?
cigarettes and donuts
raknakondee on September 21st, 2008 08:36 pm (UTC)
where's DH if it's happy ending
and what about the sprinkled donut that burned his mouth, not happy


well written, but it reminds me of gatsby, dreamers...
daffydilly121: kyuhyun3daffydilly121 on September 21st, 2008 10:01 pm (UTC)
it's happy if no one died XD
ly_tengly_teng on September 21st, 2008 04:05 pm (UTC)
It is a happy ending?

I love the ending!!
daffydilly121daffydilly121 on September 21st, 2008 07:23 pm (UTC)
ahahah it's happy enough for me XD
other people find it to be extremely depressing
ily_fosho: eunhaeyesily_fosho on September 21st, 2008 08:17 pm (UTC)
i..

<33333

lovveedd the use of sprinkles
8D


ah symbolism pieces are sooooo love 8D
xDDD



oh eunhae. i really do think that even if hyuk doesnt want to (WHICH HE DOES!), he can never resist donghae.
psssh no one can ever resist donghae. everybody loves donghae, dammit. 8D
Kathyasdfxkathy on November 12th, 2008 01:47 am (UTC)
so first things first.
i totally thought i added you as my friend before. rofl. xD
because i remember you commenting on my lj. hahah.
but then i stumbled upon your lj, and i was like, she's not my friend? o:
so that's my life story.

second thing is that i totally love this drabble.
the use of sprinkles was amazing.
YOU'RE AN AMAZING WRITER. xD